The Mourning Anchor

I thought this piece was really well written and composed. If the author wanted us to hate this person after reading the article than he did an amazing job. Description was well done and so was the overall plot including organization. This article was pretty lengthy, which was a down side because I felt lost at certain points, so maybe if it was shorter it would be more affective and it would probably keep the readers attention a lot more, I can see why you like this article mr. winter, and I noticed it was about sports again! hahaha, however basically I thought the piece was really well composed and done. Maybe something a bit shorter next time.