Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Game Story Notes


Game Story Notes

 

Elements:

•Storyline – the narrative thread that runs through most of the game story, something that addresses the significance of the event, of a strategy, of a play, or of a player. The storyline keeps fans reading, even if they’ve already watched the game.

•Context – explains the news values and offers key details, such as the score and the participants. Sometimes, this information, referred to as the nut graph, is included in the lede paragraphs for stories that do not take a narrative approach.

•Quotes – comments from players and coaches reveal insights into key plays, approaches and performances. Writers need to speak with participants on both teams.

•Key plays – descriptions and references to key plays illustrate how a team or player performed during key moments.

•Key statistics – the most significant numbers, particularly those that help propel the main storyline or that clarify a main point.

 

STORYLINE

 Nearly 24 million people tuned in to Game 6 of the NBA Finals, many cheering for Dirk Nowitzki, who elevated his game in the second half and led Dallas to its first championship. A large percentage of the TV audience also jeered LeBron James, probably the NBA’s most hated player after departing his native Cleveland for Miami following his hyped “Decision” announcement last summer. James fizzled down the stretch, shooting infrequently and poorly, setting up a perfect foil for Nowitzki, the assiduous forward. Essentially, that was the storyline for most journalists, a comparison between James and Nowitzki.

 

One of the authors used the two different players to start his lead while the other author focused more of staring off the story with the outcome of how it ended, and the last author went for more of the reaction of a character in the story. We notice that there is many different ways to start a story.

 

CONTEXT

    Should address which teams played, where they played, when they played, who won, what the final score was, and, perhaps, a brief reference to how the game culminated.

 

Author techniques:

·         Insert most of the info in the second graph and add details about what Dallas earing NBA title by winning the first three games of the series.

·         Insert several reasons why Dallas won.

 

QUOTES

                Never interview local coaches and local teams because you will get two different stories. However you should always interview the opposing team to talk about how they saw the ball movement, to then see and understand how the game was played, without having too many opinionated thoughts.

 

KEY PLAYS

 Basketball is a game of scoring runs. The team that strings together the most runs usually wins. So you’ll need to keep detailed notes as you watch a basketball game, highlighting where a team outscores its opponent in runs like 8-0, 12-2, 14-4. You’ll also want to underline key plays and to determine how a team scored several unanswered points. Was it thanks to 3-point shooting? Strong rebounding? Transition points? Focus more on the runs that usually ended being buzzard beaters and different plays that defined the games and helped the team stay strong, as well as overall player scores and include timing.

 

KEY STATISTICS

 You do not need to recite every scoring leader in a game story. Less can certainly be more. Readers’ eyes will glaze if you offer too many statistics, especially if these numbers are packed together. Look for stats that might not emerge in a box score, such as a player’s shooting percentage in a quarter or half.

 

Tuesday, March 8, 2016

Who's who Sarafina


Visual Arts Major, member of the National Art Honor Society, National Honor Society, McCallum writing center, and Student Council are only a few of the organizations Sarafina Fabris-Green has been a part of. Even though she is so involved, Sarafina still has time to support her peers. Her sophomore year she joined the rest of McCallum when going to Alamo Dome to see the football team compete. “We all loaded up in carpools, people rented buses, we all went with friends and drove down to San Antonio and got to see the game… it felt surreal.”  Out of all the things she has done one of her favorite things was photography. “My time in the photography program… was one of the most beneficial experiences… because of all the connections McCallum has as a fine arts academy has led me to meet lots of very inspiring people…” Sarafina is looking to pursue a career in urban studies to become an Urban Planner. Accepted into UT, Sarafina still waits for responses from other colleges before deciding where to go. 


Damaris Benitez
Bailee Herbold

DRAFT

Current Events Quiz 5.1

1.   Austin Police Chief Art Acevedo confirmed Monday that investigators have completed an internal inquiry into the controversial shooting last month of an unarmed, naked teen. According to Acevedo, he made the announcement soon because he says that the shooting cases have taken a year to a year and a half and he does not want to wait, therefore the timing of this story should occur quick because if it does end up taking a year, who will really care about this story in a year? The police has three options which include to either schedule a disciplinary hearing for the shooter, request an additional investigation or they could exonerate him from any policy violations. The investigative findings will only go public if released only if he is suspended for at least a day for his actions related to the shooting.

2.    Villegas, along with her family and Latino community are rushing to become US citizens to vote against Donald Trump. This family will set a trend making the entire Latino community do their best to make sure Trump will not win. President Obama has tried to help the community by launching a national campaign to galvanize legal residents to take the step. If Trump were to respond to the comment, i honestly will not know what he would say. I am Hispanic, and personally that man is crazy and insane in my point of view. sometimes i feel like he will turn the US into a monarchy!

 3.    The Texas Railroad Commissions are currently struggling lately to get more money from the oil industry since, the slumping price of oil. The commission leaders are telling conservatives in the legislature if the agency will not get enough money so they can accomplish their goal.

4.    President Obama ordered all the flags to be half down on federal buildings to be flown at half-saff in Nancy Reagan's memory. Michelle Obama will attend her funeral on Friday. It is appropriate for Ms. Obama to attend her funeral because according to the comments, she was very welcoming when they first moved into the White House, and she showed respect to them and she wanted to show respect to her. Her legacy includes being the first lady, and was an active member of the board up to the time of her death. And for 15 years she has been guiding force of the Reagan Library.

5.    A jury awarded Erin Andrews $55 million on Monday in her lawsuit against a stalker who rented a hotel room to hers and secretly recorded a nude video, concluding that the separate companies that own and operated the hotel shared in the blame. Andrews' parents described for jurors the terror   they and their daughter felt after learning of the video, but now knowing who took it, where it was shot and if someone was still watching her. Michael David Barrett shot videos in hotels in Nashville and Columbus, Ohio and posted them online and he was found guilty. The money is going to be paid by the hotel owner, not necessarily the franchise of the Marriott but the owner of the actual hotel. After the verdict, they said they were disappointed and were not sure if they would appeal.

6.   The US supreme court in a victory for gay rights  ruled Monday that states must honor adoptions by same-sex parents who move across state lines. But Alabama supreme court said in September that the woman's adoption decree from Georgia was "void" and would not be honored.The court appealed to the lesbian, they skipped the legal judgements of states.     

Friday, March 4, 2016

Rolling Stones Article PART ONE AND TWO

It was extremely well written. The article kind of makes me more aware that college is very, dangerous I guess. And I would like to point out that it's not a sports story!!! However, it's so stupid how UVA cares a lot more about a reputation than the safety of their students. I'm pretty sure that everyone who trades this article will never want to go to UVA. I was really astonished with the evidence and details included in the article, it must have been a long interview for everyone involved,  especially for the girls re-telling their traumatizing story. I absolutely hate the dean of UVA, they were useless and just there not doing anything. I won't write a lot because then I feel like I would write forever, basically the article had great organization, setting, and evidence. I liked it a lot .

IT WAS FABRICATED!!!!!! It was actually kind of noticeable, it was very detailed and they also had so many details of a rape that I don't think someone would actually repeat after such a  traumatizing event. However I think  however I think it is  this was a mistake by the Rolling Stones this could cause for them to be sued by UVA for possibly leaving a bad print on them.