Damaris Benitez
9/22/2015
Period- 6
Claire Caudill, is probably one of the most sweetest and nicest person I have ever met. She is kind and loving, however she has one of the most tragic stories I have ever heard. While asking Claire a couple of questions, we came across the topic of the baddest thing that has happened to her. She explained to me that, "In third grade, I woke up and felt something in my throat and couldn't breath, so I went to the hospital, and my mom had told me that my face was purple." As she was asked to elaborate on how it felt she explained, "...I could feel my chest caving in and popping back out, it was that bad...". I was glad to ask the question and get such an unbelievable response, it was an honor to meet such a miracle.
It was a great question to elicit this response, but you kind of got in the way of her story. You should not put yourself in the story so much. More troubling, you left the quote with her chest still caving. What happened next? Inquiring minds want to know! 95.
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